Research and Planning: Magazine (2nd draft) feedback

I was told that I should increase the size of the text for some of the headlines in order to increase the view-ability of it. It was also suggested that I should move the text on the right to the left swapping it with the popcorn and away from my central image. I should also move the text into individual layers and decrease the size of the gaps in-between the sentences. And also to add certain buzzwords such as a competition etc which should go in an area in such as the top or the bottom of the page in the red banner. I could also employ another gradient at the bottom of the page to cover the brown chair a bit, and decrease the amount of colours on my cover. Adhering closer to the 3 colour rule than the first draft.